“I don’t eat white flour, so I tried making it with raw almonds that I’d activated by chewing them with my mouth open to receive direct sunlight, and it turned out terrible. This recipe is terrible.”
Otherwise good, but this needs to be changed to "...and it was so much better than the original because it was all natural and no toxins and paleo and blah blah blah".
Well, maybe not those exact words, but you get what I mean.
EDIT: Never mind here it is.
“I just started Paleo yesterday, and I’m wondering if there’s a way to make this without the ingredients.”