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Snakes In The Ball Pit => Yay, I get to talk about me! => Topic started by: KingKalamari on October 24, 2014, 05:39:38 pm

Title: Hey people who write things, I got a question for you!
Post by: KingKalamari on October 24, 2014, 05:39:38 pm
Where do you go to get feedback on your work? I've been writing a bunch of comic scripts I want to make but feel like family and friends are a biased source for getting critique and all the actual writing forums I know of are just unhelpful circlejerks.
Title: Hey people who write things, I got a question for you!
Post by: chai tea latte on October 24, 2014, 05:50:58 pm
get more critical friends

e: ideally other people who are Actively Creative if possible
Title: Hey people who write things, I got a question for you!
Post by: nigeline on October 24, 2014, 07:27:14 pm
get more critical friends
freaky wapiti, October 24, 2014, 05:50:58 pm
this
Title: Hey people who write things, I got a question for you!
Post by: One Of The Crappy Pokemon That Nobody Likes on October 25, 2014, 01:22:15 am
Me being a more critical friend: you all's smartass answers aren't that helpful ᕕ( ᐛ )ᕗ

If anyone does know of a good writing critique forum, share it because I'd like to see one as well. It'd be pretty great if there was a writing equivalent of the ConceptArt forums.
Title: Hey people who write things, I got a question for you!
Post by: Goose Goose Honk At Me Now on October 25, 2014, 01:28:15 am
Send it to me. No, seriously, I'll give you honest feedback.
Title: Hey people who write things, I got a question for you!
Post by: Bobalay on October 25, 2014, 01:55:36 am
Me too. o/
Title: Hey people who write things, I got a question for you!
Post by: EYE OF ZA on October 25, 2014, 02:07:55 am
Something Awful has Creative Convention, a general 'creative pursuits' board for posting stuff.  Your mileage may vary on how helpful it is, and something like comic script outlines might be difficult to convey to a general audience.  (Mostly what I've seen there is writing and art, but some people have posted Youtube videos and other stuff.)

Aside from that, there's not a whole lot aside from if you know people who are also into whatever particular medium you're working in.  Usually, those people are the most willing to give frank and helpful feedback, since they've probably got a better sense of what's good/bad in comics compared to, say, your sister.
Title: Hey people who write things, I got a question for you!
Post by: Emperor Jack Chick on October 25, 2014, 07:02:09 pm
Terrible things critiqued with enthusiasm?

Feel free to kick it my way and I can assist. Notes may or may not include requests for more speed metal.
Title: Hey people who write things, I got a question for you!
Post by: KingKalamari on October 27, 2014, 07:24:09 pm
Hey, thanks for the offers, guys. I am sending out some private messages...
Title: Hey people who write things, I got a question for you!
Post by: Runic on October 28, 2014, 12:32:43 am
I'll check it out for you man!
Title: Hey people who write things, I got a question for you!
Post by: KingKalamari on November 02, 2014, 06:50:04 pm
Hey, just wanted to make sure people got my PMs: The outbox has been acting janky for me lately.
Title: Hey people who write things, I got a question for you!
Post by: Emperor Jack Chick on November 03, 2014, 12:13:01 am
I did!

I have been super busy / drunk, and have not gotten a chance to check it out yet. My apologies!

Bonus metal! (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vNthVVD2btQ)
Title: Hey people who write things, I got a question for you!
Post by: KingKalamari on November 03, 2014, 05:28:54 pm
No worries! No rush: The PMs didn't show up in my sent folder so I just wanted to make sure they got through.
Title: Hey people who write things, I got a question for you!
Post by: chai tea latte on November 03, 2014, 07:41:05 pm
No worries! No rush: The PMs didn't show up in my sent folder so I just wanted to make sure they got through.
KingKalamari, November 03, 2014, 05:28:54 pm

SMF is weird about this. go to profile > account settings > personal messaging (http://ballp.it/index.php?action=profile;area=pmprefs) and check the box next to "Save a copy of each personal message in my sent items by default".
Title: Hey people who write things, I got a question for you!
Post by: KingKalamari on November 13, 2014, 11:26:39 am
You know, I might as well just post the link to the Google Doc script I've been working with:

Enclosed is a very stupid, rough script for the comics I've been working on. Feel free to make any suggested edits and/or mock this in a funny voice (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KFzczayWeoaSj2tTXd-7Ne6QXUqBMPDGTzNo0zT8ing/edit?usp=sharing).
Title: Hey people who write things, I got a question for you!
Post by: Goose Goose Honk At Me Now on November 13, 2014, 10:57:53 pm
KK, I have had a very rough month, but I will set aside time during the T'giving break especially for your project.
Title: Hey people who write things, I got a question for you!
Post by: KingKalamari on November 14, 2014, 09:18:00 pm
KK, I have had a very rough month, but I will set aside time during the T'giving break especially for your project.
Cuddlesquid with cranberry sauce, November 13, 2014, 10:57:53 pm

Thank you very much, I'm hoping the rest of the months goes a little better for you.
Title: Hey people who write things, I got a question for you!
Post by: Nikaer Drekin on November 24, 2014, 11:46:38 am
The creative SA subforum does have a flash fiction critique thread where users can post their pieces and get critiques for them. There are a bunch of regulars that are very helpful. I'd be willing to start a thread like that here if people think it would be useful!

For anyone who wants to sharpen their writing skills, they also have a weekly fiction contest called the Thunderdome that I'd also recommend. It's a great way to gauge your skill level and challenge yourself to write well with limited words, which is always a benefit.
Title: Hey people who write things, I got a question for you!
Post by: KingKalamari on November 24, 2014, 06:34:12 pm
The creative SA subforum does have a flash fiction critique thread where users can post their pieces and get critiques for them. There are a bunch of regulars that are very helpful. I'd be willing to start a thread like that here if people think it would be useful!
Nikaer Drekin, November 24, 2014, 11:46:38 am

Actually it looks like someone already started a thread for that here (http://ballp.it/index.php?topic=1453.0). Though i still support this idea and propose we all head over to the ARC thread and wreck up the place!

Also thanks for the tip about Creative Convention. I'll hit them up sometime in the near future
Title: Hey people who write things, I got a question for you!
Post by: Emperor Jack Chick on November 26, 2014, 12:21:03 am
One thing I always ask people when I evaluate writing is if they have written down somewhere a rubric for each character's personality and mannerisms. It seriously helps maintain consistency.