There are a lot of issues I have with this piece, but I'm just going to focus on the Poe Dameron paragraph for the moment.
Part of diversity is actively putting your characters of color in impactful roles and allowing them to live as most white leads do.
Okay, yes, this is absolutely true.
Poe Dameron is also changed from the responsible and caring person he was in The Force Awakens to a reckless, disobedient, and glory-obsessed pilot. It’s very upsetting to turn one of the Latinx characters of Star Wars into a Latinx stereotype.
Poe had like three minutes of screen time in The Force Awakens, so we very well might just not gotten a full picture of him as a character. Also, I'm not sure when he's "glory-obsessed," even at his most reckless Poe is definitely in it for the sake of the Resistance, even if his perspective is misguided. And you'd have to think
extremely broadly to consider those traits Latinx stereotypes, at least the way they're utilized in the movie.
Poe is forced to deal with his new leader, Admiral Holdo, who he has a right to question, as she denies any of the Resistance information about her plan.
When does Holdo deny "any of the Resistance" information about her plan? She shuts Poe out of the planning process, and I'd say she's pretty justified in doing so, since he just ignored orders from his general and flew a mission that got their whole bombing squadron killed. She clearly confers with other officers about the plan, just not Poe.
Once again, the narrative slams down on Poe, as he later gets punished by getting shot unconscious by General Organa, followed by Leia and Holdo saying how they “like” him despite how they’ve treated him.
HE LITERALLY COMMITTED MUTINY!! Even though he thought he was doing the right thing, he still held his commanding officer hostage and put the fleet at risk. Leia and Holdo must like him, because that's about the mildest punishment you could hope for in that situation.
Leia’s “follow him” line on Crait is too little, too late, as The Last Jedi gave Poe, Finn, Rose, and Paige the backseat in terms of story treatment.
That line is Leia recognizing that Poe has grown as a leader and a person, because he realized that the attack on the cannon wasn't working and ordered a retreat to protect those under his command. He made mistakes and learned from them. This is the
exact opposite of putting a character in "the backseat," and why the first sentence in this paragraph feels somewhat hollow for me. The Last Jedi puts Poe in a way, way more central and meaningful position than The Force Awakens ever did. It allowed him to make tough decisions and develop as a character, but this writer doesn't seem to like it because he faces (completely reasonable) consequences for his decisions. But that's what well-rounded characters do! That's giving characters of color the same agency white characters have, not to mention good writing in general.
E: Okay, just two more:
Rose is left in a state of limbo at the film’s conclusion, and it’s implied that there might be a competition between her and Rey for Finn’s attention, because how feminist is it to have two women fighting over a man, right?
Did anyone else see the way Rey looked at Poe when she met him? I think Finn and Rose are going to be just fine.
Rey herself has no major role in the final battle other than rescuing the Resistance.
Yeah, she does nothing, except saving everyone's lives. So lazy, Rey. Get it together.